Monday, September 27, 2010

The Soldier by Rupert Brooke and Colonization in reverse by Louise Bennett comparison.

When authors write poems, they have an aim, which most of the times is achieved, an aim that is wanted the most is the reader identifying himself with what he is reading. Poems such as The Soldier, written by Rupert Brook, who lived from 1887 to 1915, are well understood by people who fight against their country’s benefit.  Colonization in reverse, written by Louise Bennett, demonstrates how people should work harder to get what they want; in this case she refers to her country's failure, and people emigrating so they can get opportunities. What similarities and differences are there in these two poems? Let's find it out.
We can see how in both poems, the authors refer to their countries as a powerful factor in life. In The soldier, Rupert Brook analysed death, he romanticized and glorified it.  Moreover we can see how Louise Bennett refers to how people should fight against a country’s failure so they get opportunities in life. In both poems we can see how the authors indirectly talk to people who in that time were having trouble; we can notice how Brooke is talking about a soldier, and in those times the World War II most of the people were identified with these cases, since they could either be soldiers or know someone who was having trouble with this difficult situation. Both of the countries were having trouble, they were actually different kind of problems, but one similarity that exists between both poems is the way they expresses about the beautiful love they have for their country. On the other hand we can see how Bennett writes about Jamaicans, trying to survive to what their country difficulties have to offer them; She is looking to what people is going through and she writes this poem so when people read it, they make conscience of what they are doing wrong and what they should be doing; she refers and make a good point on why they should fight, ant in this case it is not the benefit of their country but the benefit of themselves.
A point that marks both, a difference and a similarity of the poems is LOVE. They both include love for their country, but what we can analyze is the fact that in the soldier poem, the author is completely going through unconditional love to their country, through his poetry he is somewhat building up this romantic relationship that he has with England, and encouraging others to have this same relationship as perhaps a release of fear of dying. And when reading colonization in reverse we perceive how she refers to personal salvation so the country stabilizes and people reach their goals in a way they can help their own country. The similarity would be the love they have for their country even though at the same time is a difference since they both give different solutions to a problem the readers might be facing.
We discern in both poems how the tone differs, because in The Soldier poem the author draws a magic image of what death is, otherwise in Colonization in Reverse Bennett states a formal tone in which she refers to life bluntly, which gives the reader the capacity to overview what she is expressing. Both methods achieve the aim of the author and that is what counts. There is another difference in the structure the poems are written and those are the sonnets; since The Soldier was written as the fifth part of the continuation of other sonnets, this was the last poem written a year after Brooke died, the structure is as far as rhyme scheme; the octave is rhymed after the Shakespearean / Elizabethan form, while the sestet follows the Petrarchan / Italian pattern. This difference exists since in Colonization in Reverse, the poem is actually written almost as a song, it has rhythm and the suffixes it has, evolves in every single sonnet.
So both poems are meant to express the authors kind of love for their country, they are both meant for the reader to elaborate an image of the country, but they talk about different kinds of love and it differs in what people might think. We could noticed in this essay how both authors used different tones and formality to express their thought and even when the tone nor the formality was similar at all, they both talked about the same thing; and that is COUNTRY LOVE.

Word count: 747
WORDS WANT TO BE FREE.
by: Gio Maggi

6 comments:

  1. I've realized that your commentary has certain misleads but overall it contains information that is good. Perhaps next time you would keep in mind these leads to avoid such easy to do mistakes, I know proceed to tell you that regardless the previous sentences your comment was nice, contained a lot of information and thus created a view on my mind of how good it is written. Thank you for posting again and I hope to hear from you again.

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  2. Mr. Churhces...
    I'd like to thank you for being here at my blog, it is an honor for me to have such a great comment, I appreciate your time, I surely appreciate your feedback, and I will obviously take that in mind in every single word i write in the future.

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  3. Great Post!
    You used a lot of good examples making your commentary a good source for know in a deeper way about these two poems (:

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  4. I liked the way you compare and contrast the poems! Everything is very clear and you give a lot of your own oponion :)ps ilu

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  5. I enjoy your poem because you use too much examples that help us understand what are you trying to say and the way you compare and contraste.

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  6. I enjoyed reading your insights about both poems, Gio.
    Next time add your citations and bibliography at the end of the post. Thank you.

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